Changeset 1073


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Timestamp:
Nov 2, 2010, 8:20:18 AM (9 years ago)
Author:
julian.reschke@…
Message:

avoid passive voice in requirement (resolves #258)

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draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest
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  • draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest/draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.html

    r1072 r1073  
    404404      <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    405405      <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp-latest">
    406       <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-11-01">
     406      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-11-02">
    407407      <meta name="dct.abstract" content="HTTP/1.1 defines the Content-Disposition response header field, but points out that it is not part of the HTTP/1.1 Standard. This specification takes over the definition and registration of Content-Disposition, as used in HTTP, and clarifies internationalization aspects.">
    408408      <meta name="description" content="HTTP/1.1 defines the Content-Disposition response header field, but points out that it is not part of the HTTP/1.1 Standard. This specification takes over the definition and registration of Content-Disposition, as used in HTTP, and clarifies internationalization aspects.">
     
    422422               <td class="left">Updates: <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616">2616</a> (if approved)
    423423               </td>
    424                <td class="right">November 1, 2010</td>
     424               <td class="right">November 2, 2010</td>
    425425            </tr>
    426426            <tr>
     
    429429            </tr>
    430430            <tr>
    431                <td class="left">Expires: May 5, 2011</td>
     431               <td class="left">Expires: May 6, 2011</td>
    432432               <td class="right"></td>
    433433            </tr>
     
    458458         in progress”.
    459459      </p>
    460       <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on May 5, 2011.</p>
     460      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on May 6, 2011.</p>
    461461      <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
    462462      <p>Copyright © 2010 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
     
    568568      <p>Defined in <a href="#RFC5987" id="rfc.xref.RFC5987.1"><cite title="Character Set and Language Encoding for Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Header Field Parameters">[RFC5987]</cite></a>:
    569569      </p>  <pre class="inline">  ext-value   = &lt;ext-value, defined in <a href="#RFC5987" id="rfc.xref.RFC5987.2"><cite title="Character Set and Language Encoding for Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Header Field Parameters">[RFC5987]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5987#section-3.2">Section 3.2</a>&gt;
    570 </pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.4">Parameter names <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> be repeated; a header field value with multiple instances of the same parameter <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> be treated as invalid.
     570</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.4">Senders <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> generate header field values with multiple instances of the same parameter name. Recipients <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> treat these values as invalid.
    571571      </p>
    572572      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.5">Note that due to the rules for implied linear whitespace (<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616#section-2.1">Section 2.1</a> of <a href="#RFC2616" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.8"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1">[RFC2616]</cite></a>), OPTIONAL whitespace can appear between words (token or quoted-string) and separator characters.
     
    928928         </li>
    929929         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/253">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/253</a>&gt;: "clarify what LWS means for the Content-Disp grammar"
     930         </li>
     931         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/258">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/258</a>&gt;: "Avoid passive voice in message requirements"
    930932         </li>
    931933      </ul>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest/draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.xml

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    157157<t>
    158   Parameter names &MUST-NOT; be repeated; a header field value with
    159   multiple instances of the same parameter &SHOULD; be treated as invalid.
     158  Senders &MUST-NOT; generate header field values with multiple instances of
     159  the same parameter name. Recipients &SHOULD; treat these values
     160  as invalid.
    160161</t>
    161162<t>
     
    884885      "clarify what LWS means for the Content-Disp grammar"
    885886    </t>
     887    <t>
     888      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/258"/>:
     889      "Avoid passive voice in message requirements"
     890    </t>
    886891  </list>
    887892</t>
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